Evaluation of Turnitin.com Essay

Overall, I felt like I was more focused while writing this essay, especially on narrowing down my topics. However, I need to be more clear and refrain from writing sentences that trail off because I loose the main point. For next time, I need to aim at making clearer sentences so that I can effectively communicate my points. Specifically with this essay, I may have lost sight of the prompt a little ways into the essay, so next time I can make sure that all of my body paragraphs refer back to the thesis, and ultimately to the prompt.